Not much progress.
LM 4-winged Angel
ladymulti
This has seriously been a week of little progress for reasons unrelated to the interenet.  I've been working, IRL working (like off-line working, job working) so I haven't had time for this stuff. :(  I'll be getting the last part of GMT:IE tomorrow as I'm working to set up one final thing before I do.  I want the PDF of the next chapter up, ready, and available for Patreon backers when it the chapter if live.

:)  I will also be adding the bonuses of the original verions of Everlast up as bonus as well for anyone curious.  These unrefined strange bits of exitance are just as they will be; they'll be the original version (Version 1) but Version 2 will be the official version that ties in with the rest of the Infintiy series.

Anyway, I think that's my update for today; there will be another tomorrow.

[Original] "Grand Master Terian: Incomplete Edition" Chapter 3 (4 as listed on Inkitt) is up
LM 4-winged Angel
ladymulti
So I've reached the final LARGE chapter of GMT:IncompleteEdition that will be.  The next chapter is rather short and begins the time where the revision has to take place to for consistancy.

Right now, Everlast is being revised.  It is a smaller story as a whole so it is a lot easier to manage.

Cause really, my finishing progress report on Everlast read as follows:
"
June 10, 2009; 68 pages; 21403 words"
...On the other case, le'ts look at GMT:
"
337 Pages; 183568 Words..."

And "The Royal Team" is even a larger beast than GMT. :/  So of it's summary and outline documents are 10-15 pages long in word.

"Everlast" is growing, though.  I expect the over-all story to double in size.  So, in stead of ~70 pages it'll be closer to ~170.  This is 8x10 with 1/1/1/1 margins.  Not even a propper book format, either.

But, yeah, Next week will be the last of the GMT:Incomplete Edition.  It's then I'll come out with the whole way to read the other bits, even in their raw state.  I'm using them as a benefit for Patreon

The Entire thing, thus far, is here: http://www.inkitt.com/stories/59876


...

Speaking of "Everlast" as well, I decided to start building the world in Minecrat.  Oooh boy, mountiains are a beast to attempt to scupt for me.  More on that later.


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[Original] Grand Master Terian Incomplete Edition Chapter 2 Uploaded on Inkitt
LM 4-winged Angel
ladymulti
Wow, reading over it, I now know why I want to do a re-write before I call it "finished" and why I call it the "incomplete edition".  Seeing my progress on Everlast last week when I had the time to do it I know for a fact how well I could do, given the time, with Grand Master Terian...

I'd have to restruction GMT's chapter format, though... The chapters are...absorbantly long.  Or I'll have to page-break the longer-ones.  I wish I had the funds to afford an illustrator for the breaks and draw them based off my already drawn images. :(  Perhaps mine are more fitting as they're mine..more personal but... they're kinda crap and my style varies so drastical time to time. xD

Grand Master Terian Incomplete Editon on Inkitt Link: http://www.inkitt.com/stories/59876


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[Original] "Everlast" Chapter 1
LM 4-winged Angel
ladymulti
Remembe when I said I wanted to re-write "Everlast". Well... about that... :)

Safe to say that that link follows to Inkitt where the first chapter of Everlast is up and available for reading.  It's got a word-count almost double the original first chapter; the page-count is more than double and I'm happy with the slight changes to the characters I did.  I made main character not quite of an arsehole as much as I loved him for being that way.

I'm going to work on the other 8 chapters soon as well.  It only took me 2 days to re-write that chapter..  I just try to imagine doing the same for "Grand Master Terian" and it terrifies me.  I think I'm going to go on to "Kurestone" after "Everlast" is re-written though.  I want to at least have the set-up in words.  Even if it takes forever to put the other pieces out.... yeah wierd connected universe stuff.


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[Original] "Everlast", I desire to rewrite you.
LM 4-winged Angel
ladymulti
I decided today that I want to re-write "Everlast", one of the 4 Major stories of mine.  It's a much smaller undertaking than "Grand Master Terian" or "The Royal Team" so it's re-write would be so very simple.

I guess I decided it needed a little bit more too it.  It's one of the shortest of the bunch.  Since "Kurestone" (since I'm finally using all four titles) isn't technically even written, "Everlast" is the smallest.

So, I think that will be a project of mine..  I know last year was going to be the year of "Shadow Dream" (another story of mine) but that never happened.  Things happened and that never happened.  I worked on it, sure, but it was never finished; I hit something of a wall with it.

This year, though, I'm more determined than I've ever been before.  Let's do this. >:D

[Original] Grand Master Terian Incomplete Edition on Inkitt!
LM 4-winged Angel
ladymulti
I decided to create this Journal entry to talk about and discuss my original story "Grand Master Terian" which I am releasing 1 chapter a week until I hit the 4th chapter.  The the end of February, I will release no more on Inkitt and the "Grand Master Terian Incomplete Edition" will be over but that is not where the story ends.

The story actually continues much further; and really strange twists occur later on that are hard to explain that tie it together into a greater unviverse which I refer to as my "Infinity" series.

Currently, I am going through a cohesiviness check on Grand Master Terian's full story thus why I called the Inkitt version the "incompete edition".  I will, however, at the end of February be offering a special reward on my Patreon. :)

I will be creating a special Google Drive with readable files where I will upload the next chapter right away even in its no cohesive state.  I'll also be sharing information about the connected stories and why it's important I make a cohesivie check with GMT in the first place trying to keep as spoiler free as possible unless you don't mind the **SPOILER** sections I'll mark out.  :) So keep a check out on here and on my Patreon for more updates on that.  And remember, you'll only be allowed as supporter!!
...NOW, because my future rewards will involve Goolge Drive it will require a Google account (sorry, it's just the way I plan to manage it since it's jut me).

But yeah, :) This is a post for that bit of information.

So the first part is live on Inkitt as of today.  The direct link to "Grand Master Terian: Incomplete Edition" is:
http://www.inkitt.com/stories/59876. So head on over if you're interested.

Also, I've uploaed an old drawing of the main character as a child and his father over on DeviantArt: Here.  So if you want to take a look at that.  So yes, today maks the first day that "Grand Master Terian" has been released, even in an incomplete form.


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[Original] Knowing where to go.
LM 4-winged Angel
ladymulti

I've be hangingout out on Google Drive the past couple of days using Draw.io to make an organized layout to a story plan for a game (yes a game).  I signed up on IndieTeamUp (a website where you can find other like-minded game-enthusists and get-together to make games) and joined a group as a writer. :) I was send a PDF by one of them members so I was working on it a bit on that Draw.io and I REALLY like setting it up in such a way..

I didn't do it for "Hourglass", the original work that I've mentioned before, but I'm thinking about doing it for it as well.  It's nice to see a visual representation of the story paths in the flowchart that cannot be represented in simple text in a Word document. :)

So I HIGLY recomment Draw.io for story-planning especialing for game conceptulaization if the concept may take multiple paths or certain dialog choices may have positve/negitive reactions to other characters as in my concept "Hourglass".

I can't really show what I've actually done to show you what CAN be done as the concept is stil in a starting phase and is not 100% my asset so you'll just have to take my word for it. :)


Welcome~
LM 4-winged Angel
ladymulti
Hello, and welcome to my LiveJournal page~  It's been quite a long time since I update my welcome!sticky so I decided it's time~  So, again, Welcome; enjoy your visit!

My LJ here has been around for quite a long time but it's a place I've kept the longest.  When Geocites was taken from us and a lot of the old chat-room and forums fell, LJ stuck around so I've kept it.  I've been doing my best to update at least once a week and will try to hold to that. :)

And I've kept it quite the same.  LJ is a place for everything: a place for a rant on a little bit of this and a little bit of that.  I started a couple of years ago trying to categorize things so thing should be in some relative order.



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[Original/Gaming] Weekly Post of here and there~
LM 4-winged Angel
ladymulti
So I decided I wanted to start making a weekly post here on LJ.  Just to go through what I've done this week and what I'm trying for at them moment.

Firstly~ let's go over my gaming habbit, aka YouTube.  I've been posting videos on Youtube of me playing games randomly on my PC.  I figured "Hey I'm having fun doing things in this game why not record and share the fun~" so that's pretty much how its been.  I've been having issues with my PC though (my video card is crapping out apparently).  I though it was my computer's overall memory but its the memory on my Video Card.  Go figure eh... probly why the memtest came back clear hm.  Yeah...

My Youtube channel is: https://www.youtube.com/user/ladymulti?&ab_channel=LadyMulti

I also recorded myself on a crafty hobby.  I havent' processed the video together yet; I still need to put all the clips together.  I was making a hair-bow 'cause I decided I wanted to start making items to sell on Etsy.  It gives me a reason to craft random things again; I really enjoy making random little things.  And now, considering I personally don't use cutsy hairbows, I still craft them and then try to sell them.  And all the other random crafty things I can do as well without worry over why I was making it and the fact that I'll never use it.  So yea, there's that.

My Etsy shop, btw is: https://www.etsy.com/shop/InfinityGrandPalace.

Now, on to the blurb about my original fiction stuff.  As I stated last week in a post, I started making a script for a story that I started dabling with in RPGMaker.  It's coming along quite well I feel.  It's 20 pages of script already.  It wouldn't really work as a novel story but it's really neat none-the-less.  I haven't dealt with trying to make a script in forever so it's nostalgic to make a script again.  I have no idea what happened to the old script versions of some of my stories...I mean, heck, a lot of those ideas have been shelved long ago at this point to make way for the beast that is my Infinity Series.  I really like the simplisty and the stragness that is the story that's in teh script.  I have it planned out in my head...heck I don't even think it will be all that long, but it will be what it is.

Here is a small section of the script (without the formating that's in Word) :

~~~~

The room contains four doors.  Door one, the one directly in front of the entrance door is the storage room; door two, the door down the way on the back wall is the bed-room; door 3, a door just a bit further from the second door is the wash room and is the last on the back wall; and door 4, the one that juts off into the other part of the L shaped house is a crafting room.

       Lillianna

 I really need to check my supplies.

      Objective

      Translucent Text Box

 Go inside your store-room and check your supplies.

This is the first moment of control for the player.  Player has to complete objective and head into the right-most room and search the 3 main stock-piles.

After checking the supplies, Lilliana crosses her arms in pondering.

     Lillianna

  Oh darn…it seems I am running out of wood; my flint stock is really low; and I am completely out of clay.  I should really check my Adventure Journal to see where I last recorded a good place to find clay.

~~~~

So yeah, that's what I've been up to the past bit.  :)  Now, if only I could kick this migraine that I've kept for over 2 weeks, I could do more and have more drive to do more.

All for fun anyway~ That's my resolve.  I do what I want because I like it. :)


[Original] "Hourglass" (tentitive title) story script for a game.
LM 4-winged Angel
ladymulti
^o^ I haven't had much to update about, but for a time here, I've been working on a script for a game.  I started the game in RPGmaker but after I started I decided I wanted to lay down the script.  So I started that.  I was working more on it and make it look MORE like an acutal script.  Before I had written it as I would a just a story of mine but it had some wierd branches and was really sparatic....basically it wouldn't help me make the RPGmaker game any faster and would really just make it a mess.

Now will the script, I have it laid out to even tell me when to introduce tutorials and stuff and when the player takes control..the various options I have placed in the game and the optional routes you can take with interaction with the other characters.

Tis a beast but I'm considering this my first major RPGMaker project; a personal project of mine.  I kinda would like to see it in a better graphics style but I can't 3d render for crap. ;)

Anyway this is the start of a new year, last year was kinda bland in my original fiction front.  It's not that I didn't work on anything, but I didn't really make much progression.  I've made a promise to myself this year, though, that I'll finish SOMETHING and I plan to do it in a timely manner.

I'm making Let's Play videos and still playing games in my time but I'm ready to charge up my laptop and do with it what I bought it for: to take it with me and to work on my writings during breaks at work.

It's time for me to stop worrying about little things and do things I enjoy.  This year I can go to the doctor and get more medicine for my chronic migraines so that will help out a lot as well. :)

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